Buddies,
This is the first time for me to feel so really identified with an artist and expressed by his work! Kelly has so strongly influenced and inspired me, that thinking of her I wrote the lyrics of a song that I believe suits her music style a lot. Please, have a look at it, make your own comments and let me know whether you like it or not.
Title: Pure venom
Oh babe,
I’ve been a great piece of your live pawn collection
but I’m sick of staring in scenes of prevarication.
Maybe it’s cause I look as really weak
But now it’s my turn – What’s about Hide ‘n Seek
I’ve made a great effort to approach your heart
Hopefully I’m not a prey of your fortune hunt
I’ve sweared not to stop till you’re dead out
So you’d rather start looking for the perfect hideout
Chorus
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Cause I am out
With my finger on the trigger
So you’d better watch out
Be aware of my stinger
Look after your back
Feel my hot breath stroke your scruff
Oh, such a pity for you
I’m not intending to miss out
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I’ve been so hardly trying to keep my self away
But you always had the way to break my defence
You’ve now lost your path through my woods
You ‘re my little red riding hood and I am the wolf
Chorus
Ending
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You squeezed me
But I owe to live
There’s no blood left
Instead my veins are filled with
What have you transfused into me?
I guess pure venom

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I’ve made a great effort to approach your heart
Hopefully I’m not a prey of your fortune hunt
I’ve sweared not to stop till you’re dead out
So you’d rather start looking for the perfect hideout Nice article, very helpful. Thanks!
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Thanks bubby, not only for your reply but also for helping :-)
I find your little changes really sound better!!!
Very good.
I do have minor suggestions on one of your sections.
I just changed or rearranged a few words.
It’s been hard trying to keep myself away
You always find a way to break my defense
You’ve now lost your path walking through my woods
I am the wolf and you’re my little red riding hood.
That is good but i don't know if it is Kelly or not but with the amazing voice that Kelly Clarkson has i think that Kelly could sing your lyrics.